October Girl

Lol, I think it's awesome good work.

Hey, Heather I'm Max... wow now their's two Heathers you and Kitty15 welll hi and welcome. -Max

snow? Really? Already? We haven't got snow in forever! Lucky people. *Wishes her state had snow* Luckyz!

Wow Amel, that was a random question. Poetry to me would be expressing my feelings and trying to feel what others feel around you. One of my poems "Better off ...

I really liked this Linds. I loved the ending it was sensitive and sweet. Something every girl wishes would happen to her. I liked it, and no I didn't find ...

Thanks. :D I guess.

I really liked this poem. It flowed together really well. Well done, I hope to read more of your work. Hope this helps. -Max

You sit alone outside. A lit cigarette to your mouth. Taking your life away slowly. You know your killing yourself, and yet you just don't care. Your life is not ...

I really liked this.... but I think you could have expanded this a little more. (But then again that's just me.) I liked this alot!!!! Hope this helps. -Max

I liked this a little bit. But a little too much gore... you think you could tone it down a little? I mean it was awesome over all. But I ...

Very funny Mary, 9/10 -Max

You didn't get help, as I laid on the floor bleeding out. We were both in pain, but I was the only one bleeding. I bled, you cried. You watched ...

So should I leave this here, or move to lyrics?

FINALLY!!!! Someone who doesn't say it's emo..... because it's not! Thank you!

Hey, Everyone welcome to YWS!!! If you need help you know where to find me! *Coughs* PM. -Max